Desert Isolation Write Conscious Challenge
I enjoyed this a lot! The scene after our main character is captured is really well-described, so vivid and uncanny. And I like how you foreshadow that twist about Sal while keeping the intensity high throughout. Good stuff!
Thanks! Funnily enough reading yours was what propelled me to write me own
That was a fun read!
I enjoyed this a lot! The scene after our main character is captured is really well-described, so vivid and uncanny. And I like how you foreshadow that twist about Sal while keeping the intensity high throughout. Good stuff!
Thanks! Funnily enough reading yours was what propelled me to write me own
That was a fun read!